Kina
Adventurer 
Rogue[M:-410]
Posts: 95
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Kina
Jul 16, 2008 15:50:30 GMT -5
Post by Kina on Jul 16, 2008 15:50:30 GMT -5
Name: Kina
Gender: Male
Age:15
Discription: An evil...person? Kina is a rouge who will fend for himself, since no one will fend for him. His parents are dead, and he spends a great amount of time drinking at the Tavern, or fighting in the Alleys, but also spends time at the Outer Territories.
Powers: Uh, he's an Assasin, who only uses daggers and scythes, not swords, ever since a sword peirced through the flesh of all his family members. Sadly, he saw them die before him.
Companian: Jubs, a shape-shifting furball whom he met at the Lake.
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Kina
Jul 16, 2008 21:32:37 GMT -5
Post by Sergei the Sane on Jul 16, 2008 21:32:37 GMT -5
oooook....
lets see...
again, being nitpicky... but seriously. How many times are we going to see the "his/her parents were killed/died/something horrible happened leaving him on his own and so he became an assassin/wanderer/something really potentially interesting. also, at the age of (anywhere between 12-20 which isnt nearly enough time for mastery of anything) he has mastered __insert something complex here__"
seriously? I know it's fine and bla bla bla, but put a little effort into it. Make it so i dont fall asleep while reading it, Ya know?
Also, you need to read the rules, plot, (well, maybe skim the plot cuz it's so freakin huge, but it's a good idea to read it) positions, and gold threads. when you have, PM me and I'll finish updating you.
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Shadow
Adventurer
Shape-Shifter (Guild Leader)[M:-5835]
My body is a curse... Can sins ever fully be forgiven?
Posts: 551
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Kina
Jul 16, 2008 21:58:55 GMT -5
Post by Shadow on Jul 16, 2008 21:58:55 GMT -5
dude, sergei, Chill out.
the kid's obviously new here.
Hey, Kina.
I'm Shadow, and i'm gonna help you out.
you stick with me, and i'll teach you everything you need to know.
I can even get online every day.
and little by little, your skills will improve.
*thumbs up* Let's go. I'll make a thread in the gates of avaren.
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Kina
Adventurer
Rogue[M:-410]
Posts: 95
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Kina
Jul 17, 2008 7:36:38 GMT -5
Post by Kina on Jul 17, 2008 7:36:38 GMT -5
oooook.... lets see... again, being nitpicky... but seriously. How many times are we going to see the "his/her parents were killed/died/something horrible happened leaving him on his own and so he became an assassin/wanderer/something really potentially interesting. also, at the age of (anywhere between 12-20 which isnt nearly enough time for mastery of anything) he has mastered __insert something complex here__" seriously? I know it's fine and bla bla bla, but put a little effort into it. Make it so i dont fall asleep while reading it, Ya know? Also, you need to read the rules, plot, (well, maybe skim the plot cuz it's so freakin huge, but it's a good idea to read it) positions, and gold threads. when you have, PM me and I'll finish updating you. Well that was nice.  |
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Kina
Jul 17, 2008 20:13:38 GMT -5
Post by Sergei the Sane on Jul 17, 2008 20:13:38 GMT -5
sorry. I was in a weird english-teacher mood... dont worry about it. i'm sure shadow will help you out, he's pretty good at this kind of thing.
Good luck!
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Redem Jirochi
Adventurer
Orphan[M:0]
Hide in the shadows, and attack in broad daylight
Posts: 18
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Kina
Jul 24, 2008 12:47:00 GMT -5
Post by Redem Jirochi on Jul 24, 2008 12:47:00 GMT -5
Sorry to intrude sirs but there is one complaint about this character sheet. Just like the rest of your posts it is too short to explain anything or have anything happen with it, take a look at mine or shadow's character profiles to get the jist of the proper way to make one of these. Yes, i can tell you are completely new to the place but read the history, and please read all the posts of any thread you think about joining and make sure it is a correct time to jump in. The main problem with you is only the length of your posts
Sorry for the rudeness,
Redemption
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Kina
Aug 8, 2008 19:12:28 GMT -5
Post by Zero Kiriyuu † on Aug 8, 2008 19:12:28 GMT -5
oooook.... lets see... again, being nitpicky... but seriously. How many times are we going to see the "his/her parents were killed/died/something horrible happened leaving him on his own and so he became an assassin/wanderer/something really potentially interesting. also, at the age of (anywhere between 12-20 which isnt nearly enough time for mastery of anything) he has mastered __insert something complex here__" seriously? I know it's fine and bla bla bla, but put a little effort into it. Make it so i dont fall asleep while reading it, Ya know? Also, you need to read the rules, plot, (well, maybe skim the plot cuz it's so freakin huge, but it's a good idea to read it) positions, and gold threads. when you have, PM me and I'll finish updating you. That's pretty sharp, Mr.Sane... *Waves arms* Shadow! I need help too! Recently, my posts are shortening, and the quality ain't good! |
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